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Monday, February 7, 2011

poem by me- changing my life

Here is a poem i made up about changing my life. Hope you enjoy it

Im trying to change my life for the better
Its seems my mood can change with the weather.
One day i feel good but the next i am down
One day i smile and the next day i frown.

Im trying to keep my head held up high
I dont want to disapoint you, i dont want to lie.
It is a struggle, this pain will never end
But a more positive outlook is about to begin.

This is a story about a woman who changed her ways
she prayed and prayed for better days
It seems time can heal the painful stab of a knife
Its all she can hope for, for changing her life.





Song of the day:  Not ready to make nice- Dixie Chicks
"Forgive, sounds good
Forget, I'm not sure I could
They say time heals everything
But I'm still waiting"

3 comments:

  1. me gusta chick! I personally do not like poems that do not rhyme, for instance:
    Roses are Red
    Violets are Blue
    Some poems rhyme
    and Some don't
    I'm fully accepting this piece of art and I think I might take this, giving credit to you of course because I like what it says. You should smile, it decreases wrinkles :)

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  2. love it. I feel like me and you are in the same boat right now girl. <3

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  3. I love it girl! I love poems especially ones that you can relate to and what girl doesn't have complications that makes them want to change their lives.
    Favorite line -
    "It is a struggle, this pain will never end
    But a more positive outlook is about to begin."
    Just keep this line in mind and know that you have to get through the worst to get to the best.

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